Your Questions About For Those Tears I Died Lyrics

January 28, 2013
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Jenny asks…

Rate these lyrics I wrote?

(intro has a different time, which Is why the rhythm doesn’t appear to match up & the divides just separate chorus from verse- things they don‘t mean anything)
There’s an honest swelling in my throat
And a steady heartbeat to match
To tell me I don’t really care anymore
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And when I’m falling on the ground
Not bothering to wipe the tears
You will know why
I’m to preoccupied with you
With all you say and do
And the worst part is
I know it’s ending soon.
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I’m feeling the air whisk around me
Like tunnels of dying love
Come to tear me apart again.
I hear you footsteps by the door
Don’t bother to ring the bell
I’ll be there before your fingers start to crawl.
I’m feeling lonely and ashamed
That all I’ve done is place the blame
for all my failures on your shoulders.
And if you wanna leave now
I will completely understand
I’ve betrayed you all
And kept you from
All the ones you really loved.
———————————————-
So when I’m falling on the ground
not bothering to wipe my tears
You will know why
Oh, you will know why
I’m too preoccupied with you.
And all the things you say and do
But the worst part is
I know it’s ending soon.
——————————————–
That’s why you’re here, too.
So when you step off my porch
Onto the dirty linoleum floors
I hope you keep your coat on.
I hope you say t quick and leave
Leave and let me f*cking be,
Let me know that you mean it.
That we’re finished.
Now, as you’re stepping out the door
I wanna say I love you
Just to make you cringe and shake,
But those words have no real meaning
In today’s society.
So if I did, you’d still leave me.
You wouldn’t believe me.
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So when I’m falling on the ground
Not bothering to wipe my tears
You will know why.
I know you know why it is
I’m so preoccupied with you,
And all the thins you say and do,
But the worst part is, I know it’s ended,
Ended and crashed though
The roof of my heart
So I can slowly feel it splitting in
Perfect halves.
————————————————–
Yes, I know it’s ending with the truth,
But I wish I was leaving you,
Not the inverse.
Cuz letting go’s not has hard as giving up
Everything you thought you loved
Just because someone said so.
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*Instrumental*
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So, when I’m falling on the ground
You will know why.
Yeah, baby, you will know why.

Thanks for reading these! I really appreciate it!
(By the way I’m 14)
I kind of want it to sound a bit like The places you have come to fear the most by dashboard confessional when i get through with writing the guitar part for it.
(just in case you’re trying to think what it will sound like)
… And i definately meant to say THINGS not THINS in one of the verses. oops.
God, sorry another little addition, but In the first verse im not indicating that the person is outside, just that it feels like everything that the singer knows seems to be moving and changing in negative ways. If i said wind, i meant air.
SORRY!
It’s not true, by the way. lol
Darn I can’t seem to get this down. This twisted expression….
EH.
Its not emo… its indie. and its an isolated sad song.

admin answers:

Pretty good. Sort of depressing though, but maybe thats what u were going for. Good for a starting song. Hint for ur next song: write something not about love, or breakups, or heartache, or revenge. These themes seem to be the only ones out there now, i know. But if u get away and write something totally different, it has more chance of standing out and potentially going big. I do think, however, that if someone already famous had made this song, it would be a hit.

Ruth asks…

How do you like these lyrics?

Get the revolver ready, pull the trigger
Out come the bullets get ready, they come bigger
Press to my chest, take my life
No holdin’ back, I‘m ready to die

Boom! Boom! Boom!
Ready to take my soul soon
Sittin’ on a cliff looking down
While that gunshot makes a sound

It’s as simple as writing a pencil on paper
It ain’t that easy when I‘m seeing hell later
All it takes is a 1 2 3
Can’t be more simple as simple can be

(Chorus)

Why don’t you just shoot at my heart
Tear this body apart
On the verge to taking a life
Except I can’t die

If you don’t take the gun
My life isn’t done
If you just pull the damn thing
It’ll be over in a swing

_ _ _ _ _ _ _

Wait, I have a thought in my head
Do I want to take myself on my death-bed
I‘m on the road of emotionally instability
My name written in blood ain’t that pretty

Why can’t I just die?
That tear is coming down my eye
I made a mistake I can’t take back
Just make that sound and relax

But you touch my cheek
You kiss my lips and hug me
A nice hug is what you gave
Make sure to be there for my grave

(Chorus x2)

So point the damn thing at me
But it ain’t just so easy
I hear the revolver, with my eyes wet
My final fate has been met

admin answers:

Awesome! You should check out http://www.songcrypt.com If you’re not planning on performing the song, then maybe you could submit for others. Who knows if another musician selects your song, you could make some cash…

George asks…

What is the name and artist of the song with these lyrics?

All around me are familiar faces, worn out places, worn out faces.

Bright ‘n’ early for the daily races going nowhere, going nowhere.

The tears are filling up their glasses; no expression, no expression.

Hang my head I want to drown my sorrow: no tomorrow, no tomorrow.

And I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad; the dreams in which I‘m dying are the best I‘ve ever had.

I find it hard to tell you, I find it hard to take; When people run in circles it’s a very very…mad world…mad world.

(That’s only half of the lyrics but it should be enough, thanks.)

admin answers:

GARY JULES “Mad World”

All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places, worn out faces
Bright and early for their daily races
Going nowhere, going nowhere
Their tears are filling up their glasses
No expression, no expression
Hide my head I want to drown my sorrow
No tomorrow, no tomorrow

And I find it kinda funny
I find it kinda sad
The dreams in which I’m dying
Are the best I’ve ever had
I find it hard to tell you
I find it hard to take
When people run in circles
It’s a very, very mad world mad world

Children waiting for the day they feel good
Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday
Made to feel the way that every child should
Sit and listen, sit and listen
Went to school and I was very nervous
No one knew me, no one knew me
Hello teacher tell me what’s my lesson
Look right through me, look right through me

And I find it kinda funny
I find it kinda sad
The dreams in which I’m dying
Are the best I’ve ever had
I find it hard to tell you
I find it hard to take
When people run in circles
It’s a very, very mad world … Mad world
Enlarging your world
Mad world

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