Your Questions About For Those Tears I Died

December 29, 2012
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Carol asks…

HAVE YOU EVER READ A BOOK OR WATCHED A MOVIE THAT MADE YOU CRY?

either happy tears or sad tears. Dont Die, My Love is a book i read that made me cry for both reasons.

i cried when i watched The Notebook, Nights In Rodanthe, A Walk To Remember. thats all i can think of right now

i know, i know those are all chick flicks but i love them :)

admin answers:

Books:The Notebook, A Walk to Remember, Dear John

Movies:Dear John, A Walk to Remember, The Notebook, My Sister’s Keeper, Titanic

David asks…

Do you like my poetry? Give me some critique? :) ?

Goodbye

I feel that old familiar sting,
As I return to you.
And I remember everything,
When time just flew and flew.

I feel that ache inside my chest,
And I hold back my tears.
A twisted, knotted, tangled nest,
Of those forgotten years.

As I get closer to that place,
And all those memories.
I close my eyes and see your face,
I barely hear my pleas.

I’m sorry, is all I can say,
Why did I let you leave?
I cannot keep my tears at bay,
I cannot help but grieve.

You let another replace me,
Another take my place.
Death conquered you,
You didn’t fight,
You lost that final race.

But now, seeing that cold, hard ground,
Where you lay, peacefully
I say goodbye for one last time,
And hope you forgive me.

A Farewell ♥

Though I am destined to depart
With dying tears and bitter heart
Will you wait for me, will you not forget?
Though I must leave, have no regret

I leave you with my memories,
My stinging pain and sorrowful pleas
I vow I shall return someday
For in your heart I‘ll always stay.

The battlefield is slick with blood
With dying bodies, dank with mud
There they lie, now put to rest
Now finished with life’s final test

I see your face, I call your name
From heaven comes sweet, fresh, new rain
And with my dying breath, I pray
That you will forgive me, someday.

Wind

I blow, I twist, I swirl and prance
So gracefully I whirl around
I‘m everywere, I move and dance
So beautiful, without a sound

I blow your hair, I cool your face
A fluid motion you can’t stop
I‘m something that cannot be chased,
So fast, I‘m like a spinning top

I climb the mountains, chase the sky
A living, breathing, abstract life
Unstoppable, I cannot die
Not by an arrow or a knife

Alluring am I, so stunning
So unpredictable I am
Myschievous, and so cunning
I ebb and flow like nothing can

Yet sometimes, in the mist of time,
I‘m caught up in a howling rage
Still magical, and still sublime
The sea my audience, the sky my stage.

The man I thought I knew

I feel the sand beneath my toes,
This overwhelming feeling grows
The moon shines down, I think of you
And of the man I thought I knew
Why you left, I cannot say
If I had asked, would you have stayed?
If I had said I loved you so
Would you have stayed or would you go?
As I look at the moon tonight
Its eerie glow, its ghostly light
I just can’t help but think of you,
And of the man I thought I knew.

In my dream ♥

In my dream, I see you there
The wind flies and circles ’round my hair
It seems so real, It seems so true
It seems as if there’s only you.

In my dream, we laugh, we dance
Our eyes meet, I‘m in a trance
You tell me I‘m the only one
Who makes you smile like the sun.

In my dream, you take my hand
as our toes sink into the sand,
The sky is blue, the water gleams,
and everything is as it seems.

I open my eyes, my tears grow stronger
why can’t it last one moment longer?
And everyday as I awake
I see your face, and my heart breaks.

I‘m a 12 year old girl, and I was just wondering what you think. Which is your favourite? I already asked this, but I haven’t gotten any answers.

Thanks, :)

P.S. the “farewell” poem was for school, and I‘m not too crazy about iy…just so you know ;)

admin answers:

I love it and I’m 13 1/2 and I love writing poetry. You have a really good talent that you should never go. The fact that rhymed and it actually made sense made it better. Keep doing your thing girl!!
GOD BLESS!!

Lizzie asks…

Do you like my poetry?

Goodbye

I feel that old familiar sting,
As I return to you.
And I remember everything,
When time just flew and flew.

I feel that ache inside my chest,
And I hold back my tears.
A twisted, knotted, tangled nest,
Of those forgotten years.

As I get closer to that place,
And all those memories.
I close my eyes and see your face,
I barely hear my pleas.

I’m sorry, is all I can say,
Why did I let you leave?
I cannot keep my tears at bay,
I cannot help but grieve.

You let another replace me,
Another take my place.
Death conquered you,
You didn’t fight,
You lost that final race.

But now, seeing that cold, hard ground,
Where you lay, peacefully
I say goodbye for one last time,
And hope you forgive me.

A Farewell ♥

Though I am destined to depart
With dying tears and bitter heart
Will you wait for me, will you not forget?
Though I must leave, have no regret

I leave you with my memories,
My stinging pain and sorrowful pleas
I vow I shall return someday
For in your heart I‘ll always stay.

The battlefield is slick with blood
With dying bodies, dank with mud
There they lie, now put to rest
Now finished with life’s final test

I see your face, I call your name
From heaven comes sweet, fresh, new rain
And with my dying breath, I pray
That you will forgive me, someday.

Wind

I blow, I twist, I swirl and prance
So gracefully I whirl around
I‘m everywere, I move and dance
So beautiful, without a sound

I blow your hair, I cool your face
A fluid motion you can’t stop
I‘m something that cannot be chased,
So fast, I‘m like a spinning top

I climb the mountains, chase the sky
A living, breathing, abstract life
Unstoppable, I cannot die
Not by an arrow or a knife

Alluring am I, so stunning
So unpredictable I am
Myschievous, and so cunning
I ebb and flow like nothing can

Yet sometimes, in the mist of time,
I‘m caught up in a howling rage
Still magical, and still sublime
The sea my audience, the sky my stage.

The man I thought I knew

I feel the sand beneath my toes,
This overwhelming feeling grows
The moon shines down, I think of you
And of the man I thought I knew
Why you left, I cannot say
If I had asked, would you have stayed?
If I had said I loved you so
Would you have stayed or would you go?
As I look at the moon tonight
Its eerie glow, its ghostly light
I just can’t help but think of you,
And of the man I thought I knew.

In my dream ♥

In my dream, I see you there
The wind flies and circles ’round my hair
It seems so real, It seems so true
It seems as if there’s only you.

In my dream, we laugh, we dance
Our eyes meet, I‘m in a trance
You tell me I‘m the only one
Who makes you smile like the sun.

In my dream, you take my hand
as our toes sink into the sand,
The sky is blue, the water gleams,
and everything is as it seems.

I open my eyes, my tears grow stronger
why can’t it last one moment longer?
And everyday as I awake
I see your face, and my heart breaks.

I‘m a 12 year old girl, and I was just wondering what you think.

Thanks, :)

admin answers:

Good……..and nice too !!

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